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System Crash

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Everyone lost but the battle is won
Not everyone fought but everyone is scarred
This is love, this is hell.
when my body collapses in on itself
my chest stops rising
and my stomach eats itself as my brain bleeds
out of my nose, my heart winding down
into me. I feel a caressing against it,
nurturing the baby.
As I am so much more than this
shattering frame as this grenade grows inside me.
Let it sit too long and my ending explosion runs out
of energy as I implode. cracking and crumbling as an
old house giving way to the ivy, wind and sea.
my lungs flood with bile and my heart gives way to oxygen.
Reboot unsuccessful. input unrecognised. please reboot.
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saevuswinds's avatar
The second line felt every awkward. Consider changing it around the lines of: "Some weren't fighting but everyone was scarred." The fourth line was my favorite. Very nice concept!